[原创]当狐狸爱上小王子······

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  我是狐狸。一只真真正正的狐狸，不是人类口中的狐狸精，当然也化不成人形。也许因为我出生在栀子花开得烂漫的6月，所以，我身上总带着栀子花的香气。我有一双黑葡萄似的眼眸。   正如所有爱情故事的开始，一次游玩的意外中，我和 王子偶遇了。相遇得似乎有点俗套，他从猎人手中救下受伤的我。人类女子流行以身相许，于是，我就跟他回宫了······他也有一双黑葡萄似的眼眸。笑容很明朗，只是蒙着一层淡淡落寞······   和王子在一起的日子是快乐的。寂寞时我陪着他，悲伤时我陪着他，无时无刻，在他需要我的时候我都在他的身边。慢慢的我看见王子的落寞在消退，笑容也越来越多·····有一晚，他抚摸着我光亮的皮毛望着我黑葡萄似的眼眸说：“狐狸啊！狐狸！你要是人类的女子，那该有多好啊？”那一夜我听到了爱情花开的声音，我想我是爱上他了。   狐狸爱上了王子······   应了你们人类所说的快乐的日子总是转瞬即逝的。童话中人鱼公主最终遭遇人类的公主······王子到了适婚的年龄了······   于是，狐狸见到王子的次数越来越少。终于有一天，王子牵着公主的手兴奋地对狐狸说：“狐狸啊！狐狸！我终于找到了！”一阵栀子花的香气袭来，我抬头一看，一张美丽的人类女子的脸，一双黑葡萄似眼眸······狐狸觉得心里有什么东西被打碎了····   王子再也不来看狐狸了，狐狸也只能默默的祷告王子和公主从此过上幸福的生活······   可是，幸福总是容易招来神的嫉妒。王子得了眼疾，看东西开始模糊，据说将来可能会看不见·····美丽的公主不知所踪，只有狐狸默默的守着王子。只是失明的王子不知道那阵阵栀子香气是来自于狐狸还是公主·····  小白鸽告诉狐狸，“向神祷告吧！只要你愿意失去些什么东西·····”狐狸望了望王子混沌的眼眸，又望了望水中自己黑葡萄似的眼眸，下了决心。   “我愿意用我的眼睛来换王子的眼睛!”  王子的眼睛慢慢开始清澈起来，公主又回到王子身边······一切又都回到从前，幸福，安宁，只是狐狸看东西越来越模糊········  秋风吹起来了，天气渐渐开始转凉了，栀子花谢了，结了果，红红的，很好看，像血一样·········  王子和公主就要结婚了，皇宫上下一派忙碌······  和准王妃一起，王子来看狐狸了。“那是我童年最好的玩伴。”——仅仅只是玩伴？ “哦！好可爱啊！”——我相信在王子心里你比我可爱。狐狸觉得准王妃的笑容很模糊·······  “哇！多好的皮毛啊！亲爱的，我正好少了一个围脖！”准王妃摸着我的背，惊喜地叫道。我身上一阵寒意······   但狐狸不愿离开王子。   第二天，王子又来看狐狸了。我望着王子，看见他笑了，应该还是那么明朗吧？狐狸基本上已经看不见了······突然，王子停止了微笑，说到“狐狸，你是爱我的！”随即从身后掏出一个明晃晃的东西·······   一片黑暗，狐狸完全看不见了······空气中充满了栀子花的香气，耳边响起人鱼公主那凄美而又绝望的歌声······   世界上最远的距离不是我站在你面前，你却不知道我爱你。而是，我站在你面前，你却不愿意知道，我爱着你······

[此贴子已经被作者于2007-1-5 22:20:00编辑过]

二楞恶

[em01][em01][em01]我要批评你一小下   你怎么净写这些伤感的东西   人也有好的一面好不？？？[em04]

[此贴子已经被作者于2007-1-5 22:32:24编辑过]

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写的不错.....

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QUOTE:以下是引用二楞恶在2007-1-5 22:29:00的发言：
[em01][em01][em01]我要批评你一小下   你怎么净写这些伤感的东西   人也有好的一面好不？？？[em04]不否认人有好得一面,可是不好得一面写出来没什么错.............
很现实得东西,我喜欢

东京大连银

当年俺也写过诸如此类的  龟兔赛跑爱情版 [em04]

不爱我请滚

好文章不多了。。。
现在女孩子都光顾着臭美，一张嘴屁话都不会说！
能安静下来记录心情的都得：
赞~~

skywalker925

文章写的让人感受压抑。
情节内容暂且不提，措词意境有种诡秘的味道。
世上没有那么多悲观的故事，也没有必要去过多体会那种异样心情。
有的时候尝试着一种美好的结局会给自己带来一份美丽心情。
鼓励原创，三思后此贴加精！

beecn

有些压抑。
希望楼主的第三篇故事是个明朗的结局。