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发表于 2009-8-6 09:26:18
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1.注意大小写
2.语法错误
3.注意冠词的使用,以及复数形式~~
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Dear boss:
I will go home。
Do you have already read the novel yet?
I am a good tortoie ,I had to learn English after ...
happychina 发表于 2009-8-5 18:03 
Good morning,my sweet,,,,,,
Thanks !!
I see,,,,,
I will go home.Do you have already read the novel yet? I am a good good good good tortoie,I had to learn English after lunch. |
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